The Experience by D.B
A jolt of energy,
A steady ascend to the top.
Stopping and staring into space,
The Rapidly falling into reality.
A loop of immaturity.
Making a Sharpe left
into maturity.
Rising quickly to peer pressure
and falling to no one.
Jerking back and forth between
Try again and I GIVE UP!
Being turned upside down bu
life and all it has to offer.
Now slowing down, finally
coming to a stop of peace and understanding.
This has been my life .
Please exit to you left.
I am really struck by the phrase, “a loop of immaturity”–the use of “loop” instead of “cycle”, which is common, gives the concept freshness. And “loop” almost implies effortlessness, whereas “cycle” implies effort, or at least action. Nicely done.